I will provide a developmental edit for your fantasy novel

So, you've poured yourself into your own world, and seen your main character go through hell and back. But, does the story actually work?

I offer developmental editing for fantasy fiction, with no AI involved at any stage. Just my own thoughts, and a bit too much coffee.

What I look at: 

Plot and story logic 

Pacing and flow 

Character motivation and arcs 

World-building consistency 

Structure

Packages: 

1. The First Act Edit (up to 40k) - this is what I call the "Am I on the right track?" edit. You've started, and perhaps have a thought of the rest - but feel like it's not entirely there? Then you should go with this one and we can work it out together.
2. Full Manuscript Edit (up to 100k) - a complete developmental edit with series notes. You will be tired of seeing my name after this one.
3. Full Manuscript VIP - everything above, plus a revision call and a second round of feedback. Just that little extra sprinkle.

All packages include an editorial letter and inline comments.

For manuscripts over 100k, message me before ordering.