Coral F

Read the story very fast, went in depth on a report thereafter. She was able to digest a lot of the story and make a lot of connections in the plot. Her insights were polish, some prose tightening and some clarity, all of which are entirely valid. She was always communicative to me throughout the process,... Mostra di più

Third manuscript Coral has read for me, and the only reader whose notes I never have to go back and verify. The margins are the real product. She marks the exact spot her attention broke — "I stopped right before this point because I couldn't find the flow" — and I cut four passages on the strength of... Mostra di più

I enjoyed working with Coral. She pointed out a few areas I could expand in scenes in my MS and I'll take that away with me. I do wish there were more comments on the MS as I specifically asked for that, but she was very polite and delivered way ahead of time!

She's my go-to for my first beta reader for my books! Since she's familiar with my created world she's able to point out where the world-building is strongest and where it loses effectiveness. Additionally, her understanding of the characters from previous books helped to see where developing their reactions... Mostra di più

Coral F. read — five sittings across five days — and came back with the two things a devotional can only learn from a reader. She named the exact sentences where her attention dropped, in Weeks 7 and 9, and both turned out to be the same defect: an idea arriving before the person it happened to. She... Mostra di più