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I will beta read and critique your fantasy manuscript
Hi there! My name is Debbie. I'm from Australia. I'm a passionate reader, writer, and self-published author who lives and breathes the written word. Over the last ten years, I have devoted myself to l...
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leosvilla
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Deborah’s beta reading report and inline comments gave me a fresh perspective, providing the clarity I needed to improve several vital chapters of my book....
nikkib89
Stati Uniti
I cannot recommend Deborah enough! I will 100% be back for my next book. I bought her premium package, and it is more than worth the price. Her commentary...
sberenberg
Stati Uniti
Another successful Beta Edit project. Deborah is exceptional at identifying opportunities to improve and tighten up my writing. She provides great feedback,...
stefanb246
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I had a very good experience with Deborah. She provided some insightful comments about some repetitive descriptions and world-building that were bogging down...
fightingwater
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Quick turn around time and very professional. I like the method of giving reactions as it is read and notes after the fact. Very helpful. It was a nice experience.
Informazioni su questo servizio
I will provide clear, honest feedback for your fiction manuscript.
*Please message me before placing your order to confirm availability.
For this gig, I require:
- Your manuscript as a Word doc/docx.
I offer three beta packages depending on the depth of feedback you're looking for:
Basic Reader Reaction Beta (up to 10K words)
Engaged reader impressions and emotional reactions. This package focuses on how the story feels to read, including moments of confusion or plot holes. Limited margin comments and actionable insights.
Standard Story-Level Beta + Report (up to 40K words)
Selective margin comments plus a feedback report covering plot, pacing, characters, and key revision priorities. Includes actionable suggestions.
Premium In-Depth Beta + Full Report (up to 100K words)
Full margin comments and a comprehensive feedback report analysing story structure, character arcs, world-building, and emotional impact. Includes actionable suggestions.
*Each package includes a maximum word count.
Please add extra words before ordering if needed.
If your manuscript greatly exceeds my max word count of 100K, please contact me for a custom offer.
I look forward to working with you!
Lingua:
Inglese
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FAQ
What subgenres of fantasy do you work with?
I read all subgenres of fantasy fiction.
Can I ask specific questions about my manuscript?
Basic package: 1 area of concern/interest or question. Standard package: Up to 2 questions. Premium package: Up to 4 questions. Questions must be provided before reading begins and will be addressed within the feedback or report.
Do you provide line edits, corrections, or rewrites?
No. This gig is strictly a beta reading service. I do not provide line editing, proofreading, copyediting, or rewriting in any package.
What if my manuscript exceeds the word count limit?
Each package includes a maximum word count. If your manuscript exceeds the listed limit, please add the appropriate extra word count before ordering. If your manuscript greatly exceeds 100K (140K+), please contact me before ordering.
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L leosvilla
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Deborah’s beta reading report and inline comments gave me a fresh perspective, providing the clarity I needed to improve several vital chapters of my book. I am eternally grateful for her help and insightful notes. I highly recommend Deborah—she is the real deal. Thank you so much! : )
Fino a 50 USD
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2 giorni
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nikkib89
Stati Uniti
I cannot recommend Deborah enough! I will 100% be back for my next book. I bought her premium package, and it is more than worth the price. Her commentary that she left in 'real time' tells me what my readers will think, and she caught several things that I missed. But the best part is how deeply...
100 USD-200 USD
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13 giorni
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?S sberenberg
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Another successful Beta Edit project. Deborah is exceptional at identifying opportunities to improve and tighten up my writing. She provides great feedback, and even if there are no suggestions, she shows she is following along and gets it. I consider Deborah part of my creative team. I plan on including her Beta Editing for all my upcoming fantasy novels.
100 USD-200 USD
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3 settimane
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?S stefanb246
Stati Uniti
I had a very good experience with Deborah. She provided some insightful comments about some repetitive descriptions and world-building that were bogging down my first few chapters, inspiring me to make some changes to improve the pacing, and also identified a potential area of improvement that wasn't...
200 USD-400 USD
Prezzo
2 settimane
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?F fightingwater
Stati Uniti
Quick turn around time and very professional. I like the method of giving reactions as it is read and notes after the fact. Very helpful. It was a nice experience.
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
5 giorni
Tempo
Utile?
Recensioni
146 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
Più rilevante
L leosvilla
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Deborah’s beta reading report and inline comments gave me a fresh perspective, providing the clarity I needed to improve several vital chapters of my book. I am eternally grateful for her help and insightful notes. I highly recommend Deborah—she is the real deal. Thank you so much! : )
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
2 giorni
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?N nikkib89
Stati Uniti
I cannot recommend Deborah enough! I will 100% be back for my next book. I bought her premium package, and it is more than worth the price. Her commentary that she left in 'real time' tells me what my readers will think, and she caught several things that I missed. But the best part is how deeply...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
13 giorni
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?S sberenberg
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Another successful Beta Edit project. Deborah is exceptional at identifying opportunities to improve and tighten up my writing. She provides great feedback, and even if there are no suggestions, she shows she is following along and gets it. I consider Deborah part of my creative team. I plan on including her Beta Editing for all my upcoming fantasy novels.
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
3 settimane
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?S stefanb246
Stati Uniti
I had a very good experience with Deborah. She provided some insightful comments about some repetitive descriptions and world-building that were bogging down my first few chapters, inspiring me to make some changes to improve the pacing, and also identified a potential area of improvement that wasn't...
200 USD-400 USD
Prezzo
2 settimane
Tempo
D Risposta del venditore
Utile?F fightingwater
Stati Uniti
Quick turn around time and very professional. I like the method of giving reactions as it is read and notes after the fact. Very helpful. It was a nice experience.
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
5 giorni
Tempo
Utile?
