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I will audit novel plot, logic, and world building
Ghostwriter and Story Structure Auditor
I am a professional writer and systems thinker with a background in ghostwriting across multiple genres. I have built fictional worlds from the ground up and developed complex narratives for clients a...
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You know something is wrong with your story. The pacing drags. A character stops sounding like themselves. Your magic system made sense in chapter three and starts contradicting itself by chapter twelve. Your readers feel it. You feel it.
That is what I do.
I am a professional writer with deep experience across fantasy, romance, thriller, and science fiction. I conduct technical audits. Every finding is specific, traceable, and fixable.
Beta readers give you impressions. I give you a structured report identifying what broke, where it broke, and what a sound fix looks like.
A full audit covers world-building architecture, narrative pacing, character voice consistency, power system logic, and causality closure. You receive a professional, consultant-style report with embedded diagrams, including a pacing heat map, a character archetype map, and a causality closure tracker.
I also audit AI-assisted manuscripts. AI tools frequently introduce logic inconsistencies, character drift, and broken causality chains that are difficult to catch without a structural review.
If you have been through beta readers and still feel something is wrong, this audit will name it.
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Nigeriano
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FAQ
How is this different from beta reading or developmental editing?
Beta readers give impressions. Developmental editors rewrite and reshape. I do neither. I identify exactly where your story's internal logic fails, why it fails, and what a structurally coherent fix looks like. You keep full creative control.
What genres do you work with?
Fantasy, romantasy, paranormal romance, science fiction, and thriller. If your manuscript has a rule system, a world, or a power structure, I can audit it.
Do you audit AI-assisted manuscripts?
Yes. AI tools frequently introduce logic gaps, character drift, and broken causality that are hard to catch without a structural review. I treat AI-assisted manuscripts the same as any other.
What do I need to send you?
Your manuscript in Word format and a brief summary of your world's core rules, magic system if applicable, and any specific areas you suspect are problematic.
Will you rewrite anything?
No. This service identifies and diagnoses structural problems. It does not rewrite your manuscript. Every finding comes with a fix direction you implement yourself.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
Completely. Your manuscript, characters, and world details are never shared or referenced outside this engagement.
Can I order if my manuscript is not finished?
Yes, as long as you have a complete act or section you want audited. Partial manuscripts are welcome on the Basic tier.
