Fay

I'm torn. On the one hand, the report missed a lot of details. The novel's protagonist wasn't mentioned once, and some of the plot events/mechanics were either misinterpreted or misremembered. The report doc itself seemed to be a speech-to-text transcript and was not cleaned up or formatted in a readable... Mostra di più

Fay is a very thorough beta reader who clearly engaged with the manuscript and wasn't afraid to provide honest criticism. The feedback was detailed and focused heavily on story structure, pacing, marketability, and larger developmental suggestions rather than surface-level comments. While I didn't agree... Mostra di più

Fay delivered her review on time as expected and provided a lovely encouraging review. It was clear she grasped the main themes of my manuscript and understood what I was trying to do. I genuinely appreciate her feedback.

Great overall feedback that was formatted into plot, style, and tone sections. The comments within the text itself were very helpful and showed minute-by-minute comments on pacing, typos, and thoughts as the book progressed. I am very satisfied with this project. It was exactly what I needed.

One of the best breakdowns of my entire story from start to finish hitting all categories from pacing to characterization to how things could be worded to strengthen the manuscript. I would give 6 stars if that was possible. Great communication as well and very adaptive! Highly recommend!