I will give your story or script an in depth critique

If you've ever wondered what people think of your writing, what mistakes you're making, and/or how to improve, you may be interested in an in-depth critique from a writer, actor, and avid reader.

Just send me your story or script and you will get an honest analysis that goes beyond grammatical errors and awkward syntax. I will be looking at characterization, symbolism, flow, theme, tone, use of metaphorical devices, what your major vices are, and overall readability/acting potential when giving your critique.

These will not be for the easily offended. While I will point out your strengths as well as your weaknesses and will not criticize without advice on improvement, this is not for ego-stroking. These are for writers who are looking to improve.