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I will read and critique your fiction manuscript
Passionate editor, published writer, book lover
After spending years learning English grammar, spelling, and punctuation in order to make it my own, a little voice inside me always tells me to fix what is wrong. The only beings capable of holding m...
Informazioni su questo servizio
Are you looking for a fresh set of objective eyes to look at your manuscript? Do you need feedback to find out what's working, what isn't, and how to improve your writing? Look no further.
I am an editor and fellow writer with a passion for fiction. I want to help you bring out the best in your stories and yourself. All my feedback will be constructive, offering potential solutions to any problems I might find. From both a writer's and a reader's perspective, I will give feedback on:
You will receive a document that's at least 1,000 words of pure feedback. I hope I can help you make the best out of your manuscript!
Please message me before placing an order so we can work it all out. I'm looking forward to working with you!
- Jane Barnaby
*Note: This is not an editing service. If you need proofreading or copyediting, you are free to visit my other gig.
I am an editor and fellow writer with a passion for fiction. I want to help you bring out the best in your stories and yourself. All my feedback will be constructive, offering potential solutions to any problems I might find. From both a writer's and a reader's perspective, I will give feedback on:
- How hooking your first chapter is
- How engaging your writing is
- How realistic your dialogue is
- How confusing your story is (if at all)
- How well the story flows
- How readable the story is
- How realistic the characters are
- How visual the world is
You will receive a document that's at least 1,000 words of pure feedback. I hope I can help you make the best out of your manuscript!
Please message me before placing an order so we can work it all out. I'm looking forward to working with you!
- Jane Barnaby
*Note: This is not an editing service. If you need proofreading or copyediting, you are free to visit my other gig.
Lingua:
Inglese
Preferenza per lo stile di consegna
Informa il freelance di eventuali preferenze o preoccupazioni relative all'uso di strumenti di IA nel completamento e/o nella consegna dell'ordine.
FAQ
What if my manuscript is longer than 75,000 words?
I am still more than happy to read and critique it! Just send me a message and I will make a custom offer for you.
What genres do you read?
Any, so long as it's fiction and creative writing. I have a special place in my heart for SF/F and MG, but I love all books.
Do you also offer proofreading or copyediting services?
Yes, I do! You can find the gig on my profile.
Recensioni
9 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Consiglia a un amico
- Servizio conforme alla descrizione
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ennylswollef
Spagna
I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...
Utile?J jrmastic
Stati Uniti
Thought the report could have been more detailed
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Risposta del venditore
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heatherpaint391
Cliente abituale
Regno Unito
Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!
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azav11
Stati Uniti
Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.
Utile?O outsidetheboxj
Stati Uniti
I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!
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Recensioni
9 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Consiglia a un amico
- Servizio conforme alla descrizione
Ordina per
Più rilevante
E ennylswollef
Spagna
I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...
Utile?J jrmastic
Stati Uniti
Thought the report could have been more detailed
J Risposta del venditore
Utile?H heatherpaint391
Cliente abituale
Regno Unito
Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!
Utile?A azav11
Stati Uniti
Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.
Utile?O outsidetheboxj
Stati Uniti
I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!
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