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I will beta read your fantasy manuscript
Hard working Indie Fantasy Author, graduated from Georgia State University with a BA in Film and Media with a minor in English. While my studies in university were for Film, my attention has always be...
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I am all about a well-constructed narrative and a beautiful story. There is nothing more compelling than a fun adventure coupled with a journey of change for a character with unique desires and flaws. With my advice and pointers as a beta-reader, your story can be just that and reach the eyes and hearts of millions!
For each manuscript, I will give a full read-through with detailed thoughts from a reader's perspective. I'll give you a full analysis of bright spots, areas that need improvement, areas to consider omitting, and thoughts on the story's structure itself. Do note, my suggestions for improvement/omission are not the law. They are merely suggestions and final decisions on your manuscript are entirely up to you.
As for what I will be breaking down in your narrative for you:
- Opening/Hook
- Plot/Pacing
- Characters/characterization
- Dialogue
- Setting/Worldbuilding
The only genres I am reading at this time are:
- Fantasy (Adult, YA, historical)
- Science Fiction
- Contemporary
- Horror
Any questions or specific things you're looking for concerning the beta-read, feel free to send those with the manuscript.
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Inglese
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C carolinesophiah
Stati Uniti
I really appreciate John's feedback. It was really insightful and he gave me quite a few unique things to think about that I hadn't considered yet. His feedback was clearly communicated, detailed and organized, compassionate, and easy to understand. He was passionate, put a lot of care into his critique...
100 USD-200 USD
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2 settimane
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tahsah_etti
Stati Uniti
Great feedback that I really needed to hear! I can tell he really took this seriously due to the quality of the responses to my questions regarding my novel. I will definitely be working with John in the future and would highly recommend him to anyone looking for a beta reader!
100 USD-200 USD
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13 giorni
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obikodi
Australia
John is a great beta reader who provides thoughtful insight and meaningful suggestions towards the work. His report has given me food for thought, and given this was my third beta reader hire on this platform, it was nice to haven not only a different perspective but a male one. I very much enjoyed...
Utile?B 
brianmyers126
Stati Uniti
Only beta reader (out of 25 over a 18 month period) I have had for the same speculative fiction manuscript who admitted to only reading 1/6th of the manuscript before submitting his evaluation. While I appreciate all feedback, both negative and positive, the 700 words was vague and not very actionable.
Utile?J jomobenun
Stati Uniti
John provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. He was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, John!
Utile?
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8 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
Più rilevante
C carolinesophiah
Stati Uniti
I really appreciate John's feedback. It was really insightful and he gave me quite a few unique things to think about that I hadn't considered yet. His feedback was clearly communicated, detailed and organized, compassionate, and easy to understand. He was passionate, put a lot of care into his critique...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
2 settimane
Tempo
Utile?T tahsah_etti
Stati Uniti
Great feedback that I really needed to hear! I can tell he really took this seriously due to the quality of the responses to my questions regarding my novel. I will definitely be working with John in the future and would highly recommend him to anyone looking for a beta reader!
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
13 giorni
Tempo
Utile?O obikodi
Australia
John is a great beta reader who provides thoughtful insight and meaningful suggestions towards the work. His report has given me food for thought, and given this was my third beta reader hire on this platform, it was nice to haven not only a different perspective but a male one. I very much enjoyed...
Utile?B brianmyers126
Stati Uniti
Only beta reader (out of 25 over a 18 month period) I have had for the same speculative fiction manuscript who admitted to only reading 1/6th of the manuscript before submitting his evaluation. While I appreciate all feedback, both negative and positive, the 700 words was vague and not very actionable.
Utile?J jomobenun
Stati Uniti
John provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. He was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, John!
Utile?
