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I will beta read and write professional feedback on your novel
Editor, Beta Reader Offering Constructive Fiction Feedback for Authors
I’m Johan Robertsson—a published author and editor with a background in journalism, marketing, and creative writing.
For almost two decades, I’ve worked with stories in every form, from ad copy to fu...
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Informazioni su questo servizio
Do you want to know how readers truly experience your story?
After spending months or even years writing and revising, its easy to lose perspective. You've read your manuscript so many times that every scene feels maybe a bit too familiar. Is your story still engaging? Do your characters feel real? Does the pacing keep readers turning pages?
What you need is a Beta Read.
As your beta reader, I'll give you the perspective you can't get on your own: that of a thoughtful, honest, and invested reader who also understands the craft of storytelling. You'll receive a detailed report describing how your story comes across, what pulls readers in, what might confuse or slow them down, and what truly stands out as memorable.
My goal is to help you see your work through fresh eyes so you can enter your next revision knowing exactly what works and what needs attention.
Why should you choose me?
Because I'm not only a published author, but a writer who has been where you are, who understands the need for crucial outside perspective before taking the next step. I know how to give feedback that's honest, encouraging, and actionable, giving you a roadmap to how to make your story shine.
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FAQ
Is my manuscript ready for beta reader feedback?
I believe you are ready for beta reader feedback when you've done everything you can to make your manuscript readable and engaging. A beta reader's feedback helps you polish and punch up your manuscript before querying/publishing. If you don't feel ready yet, check out my developmental edit gig.
What does the Inline Comments include?
Depending on which tier you order, inline comments will include my realtime impressions as a reader ("this evoked this emotion/reaction") and in-depth feedback and ideas for improvement ("this line of dialogue seems out of character", or "what if she didn't do that, but this instead?").
What does the Reader Report include?
The report will contain a breakdown of all major categories of your story and thoughts and feedback on them. These include: overall impressions and review; characters and their development; plot and structure; settings and descriptions; themes and motifs; prose and grammar; and additional thoughts.
Which genres do you give feedback on?
During my years as a beta reader, I have given feedback on everything from romance to non-fiction. As a reader, I am familiar with all genres of fiction and non-fiction, and am a naturally curios person, ready to dive into any subject matter.
Does it matter if I write in English (UK) or English (US)?
No. As a Swede, I've been taught both. I am familiar with everything from specific spelling variations to common expressions on both sides of the pond. If I'm ever unfamiliar with anything, I will always put in the effort to make sure your manuscript is consistent in it's specific use of English.
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B bjr_books
Canada
I hired Johan R to complete a standard level beta read of my novel, which was expected in seven days. Not only did he complete his report in less than half the advertised time, he did an incredibly thorough job and provided me with specific feedback. I am currently in the revision stage, and his suggestions...
Fino a 50 USD
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3 giorni
Tempo
Utile?J jessicarenae117
Stati Uniti
Freaky fast on the delivery. Thank you so much for the feedback :) Was nice working with you :)
50 USD-100 USD
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6 giorni
Tempo
Utile?B brentnewcomb
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Wonderful analysis. Exceptional report. Break down of plot, flow, characters, themes, motifs. Could not be more happy with thoroughness and level of analysis. Top notch!
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.J jordanbengtson
Stati Uniti
My book was getting stagnant to write. Having a way out where it was someone else's issue was nice. JRWAF5's reader report was definitely on the money, but I had an inquiline about what they were going to say. It was more of how they said it. They gave me ideas about how I actually want my book to be...
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.S sandramontanino
Stati Uniti
Very informative. Exceptional, actually!
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.
Recensioni
12 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
Più rilevante
B bjr_books
Canada
I hired Johan R to complete a standard level beta read of my novel, which was expected in seven days. Not only did he complete his report in less than half the advertised time, he did an incredibly thorough job and provided me with specific feedback. I am currently in the revision stage, and his suggestions...
Fino a 50 USD
$
3 giorni
Tempo
Utile?J jessicarenae117
Stati Uniti
Freaky fast on the delivery. Thank you so much for the feedback :) Was nice working with you :)
50 USD-100 USD
$
6 giorni
Tempo
Utile?B brentnewcomb
Cliente abituale
Stati Uniti
Wonderful analysis. Exceptional report. Break down of plot, flow, characters, themes, motifs. Could not be more happy with thoroughness and level of analysis. Top notch!
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.J jordanbengtson
Stati Uniti
My book was getting stagnant to write. Having a way out where it was someone else's issue was nice. JRWAF5's reader report was definitely on the money, but I had an inquiline about what they were going to say. It was more of how they said it. They gave me ideas about how I actually want my book to be...
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.S sandramontanino
Stati Uniti
Very informative. Exceptional, actually!
Utile?1 persona ha trovato utile questa recensione.
