Lameez

Fifty-one inline comments and every one of them anchored to a specific line. She marked where she stopped, where she went back and reread, and why — which is exactly what I asked for and what almost nobody actually delivers. She found four things four previous reviews had missed, including a flat contradiction... Mostra di più

Another gold standard beta reader, Lameez never shies away from telling where the manuscript looses immersion. She is excellent at narrative structure review and following the development of characterization. She provides her report in a timely manner and her suggestions make the revision process that much easier.

Lameez gave me the most useful beta read I've received on any of my books. 73 in-line comments marked as she read — real reactions, not a summary written afterward. Five readers told me my book over-explained itself; she's the only one who could tell me where. She flagged every place I got confusing... Mostra di più

Lameez is wonderful to work with! For this beta round, I had a past repeat reader, a very critical-eyed reader, and Lameez. Lameez seemed to be the most like an average reader of the genre, YA/NA fantasy, and was very encouraging, while also pointing out issues that took her out of the story in the moment.... Mostra di più

She did quite well, I was hoping that it would've been approached more in a way where she was more aware that she was reading maybe only the first 1/3 of the novel as opposed to a completed one, but her feedback was genuine and helpful.