Melissa K. non è disponibile fino al Nov 9, 2026

“I'm out of office due to a family matter. I'll be back on Monday. ”

I will developmental edit your picture book or children story

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Stati Uniti

Parlo Inglese

502 ordini completati

Developmental Editor, Writer, and Writing Coach

Hi, I'm Melissa! I'm a Developmental Editor and Writing Mentor. I specialize in giving detailed editorial critiques, line-editing, proofreading, and self-publication for Children's Books, Young Adul...

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Informazioni su questo servizio

** PLEASE CONTACT ME BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER **


You've written your story, now what? Whether you're publishing Traditionally or pursuing Self-Publishing, I'll help get your manuscript organized and to a finished product to send to an agent, publisher, or to progress to publish yourself.


What I Offer:

  • Constructive Feedback. Detailed in-text edits, marginal comments and an overall review written at the end.
  • Checking Word Choices. Review age-appropriateness, that words are at the correct reading-level. If you're unsure what reading-level your story is, I can let you know. 
  • This is only a critique. More services listed below.


Additional Services:

  • Proofreading & Line Editing. I'll do a critique first (additional cost).
  • Book Layout Info. Questions about the front and back matter? 
  • Art Directions. Questions about hiring an illustrator? Please note: I don't write art directions, but I'll critique them (additional cost). 
  • Illustration Critique. I'll critique a mock-up of your book, offering advice on the illustrations and layout (additional cost). 


**For Chapter Books, please message me for a custom order.


Have a question? Message me! It'd be a pleasure to hear from you. =)

Lingua:

Inglese

Tipo di contenuto:

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Recensioni

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    robert_garofal

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    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provided thoughtful and helpful feedback on the pacing of my manuscript. She clearly read the story carefully, recognized its heart and characters, and pointed out specific areas where the pacing and story development could be strengthened. Her observations gave me a clearer understanding of...

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    2 giorni

    Tempo

    Utile?
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    No
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    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provided thoughtful, detailed feedback on my children’s book manuscript. She recognized Robert’s personality and humor while offering specific suggestions to strengthen his motivation and the story’s direction. Her comments clearly explained both what was working and what needed attention. I...

    50 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
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    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa’s detailed feedback and guidance have helped me strengthen my manuscript and grow as a writer. She explains her suggestions clearly, identifies what’s working, and shows where the story needs more attention. Thank you, Melissa, for all your help, encouragement, and the care you’ve given my story. I look forward to continuing to work with you.

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
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    selinapatricia

    GB

    Regno Unito

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    It was a pleasure working with Melissa. She demonstrated a genuine understanding of my children’s book and the sensitive subject matter. Her feedback was thoughtful, constructive and encouraging, helping me see where the story could be strengthened while preserving its heart and message. Melissa was...

    50 USD

    Prezzo

    4 giorni

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
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  • R

    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provides thorough, specific feedback and takes the time to explain her suggestions clearly. Her guidance has helped me strengthen my story’s structure, develop the characters, and clarify the world for young readers. I appreciate her patience, thoughtful communication, and collaborative approach....

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
Recensioni

182 recensioni per questo servizio
5,0

(180)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Valutazione dettagliata
  • Livello di comunicazione del venditore
    5
  • Qualità della consegna
    5
  • Valore della consegna
    5
Ordina per
Più rilevante
  • R

    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provided thoughtful and helpful feedback on the pacing of my manuscript. She clearly read the story carefully, recognized its heart and characters, and pointed out specific areas where the pacing and story development could be strengthened. Her observations gave me a clearer understanding of...

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    2 giorni

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
  • R

    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provided thoughtful, detailed feedback on my children’s book manuscript. She recognized Robert’s personality and humor while offering specific suggestions to strengthen his motivation and the story’s direction. Her comments clearly explained both what was working and what needed attention. I...

    50 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
  • R

    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa’s detailed feedback and guidance have helped me strengthen my manuscript and grow as a writer. She explains her suggestions clearly, identifies what’s working, and shows where the story needs more attention. Thank you, Melissa, for all your help, encouragement, and the care you’ve given my story. I look forward to continuing to work with you.

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
  • S

    selinapatricia

    GB

    Regno Unito

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    It was a pleasure working with Melissa. She demonstrated a genuine understanding of my children’s book and the sensitive subject matter. Her feedback was thoughtful, constructive and encouraging, helping me see where the story could be strengthened while preserving its heart and message. Melissa was...

    50 USD

    Prezzo

    4 giorni

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No
  • R

    robert_garofal

    US

    Stati Uniti

    Collaborazione in corso
    5

    Melissa provides thorough, specific feedback and takes the time to explain her suggestions clearly. Her guidance has helped me strengthen my story’s structure, develop the characters, and clarify the world for young readers. I appreciate her patience, thoughtful communication, and collaborative approach....

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    1 giorno

    Tempo

    Utile?
    Sì
    No