Leggerò in anteprima il tuo manoscritto fantasy con feedback editoriale dettagliato
Revisione professionale e feedback editoriale
Livello 1
Ha soddisfatto determinati criteri di prestazione e mostra un forte potenziale nel marketplace.
Molto reattivo
È noto per le risposte super rapide
Cosa è piaciuto agli altri di questo freelance
leh047

Stati Uniti
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her...
echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped...
juliejeanette23

Stati Uniti
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements...
mssoule

Stati Uniti
Lauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and...
Informazioni su questo servizio
Offro una lettura beta attenta combinata con feedback editoriale dettagliato per fantasy, romantasy, dark romance, horror, thriller psicologici e narrativa di fantascienza
Leggo sia da una prospettiva di lettore che di editor, prestando molta attenzione a come si sente la storia, identificando anche cosa potrebbe aver bisogno di essere rafforzato.
In base al tuo pacchetto, il mio feedback può includere:
- Reazioni e commenti in linea
- Analisi della trama e del ritmo
- Sviluppo dei personaggi e delle relazioni
- Feedback su dialoghi e worldbuilding
- Suggerimenti su chiarezza, phrasing e flusso delle frasi
- Suggerimenti per revisioni e brainstorming
- Un rapporto dettagliato per il lettore che evidenzia punti di forza, preoccupazioni e priorità di revisione
Il mio obiettivo non è semplicemente dirti se mi è piaciuto il tuo manoscritto. Spiegherò cosa funziona, cosa mi ha staccato dalla storia, dove mi sono confuso, cosa mi ha entusiasmato come lettore e dove la storia potrebbe approfondirsi
Quando è utile, offrirò suggerimenti pratici e possibili soluzioni rispettando la tua voce e la direzione che desideri per la tua storia.
Non uso AI per leggere, criticare o generare feedback sui manoscritti dei clienti.
Lingua:
Inglese
Preferenza per lo stile di consegna
Informa il freelance di eventuali preferenze o preoccupazioni relative all'uso di strumenti di IA nel completamento e/o nella consegna dell'ordine.
Il mio portfolio
FAQ
Traduzione automatica.
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Accesso in visualizzazione o commento su Google Docs
6 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
L leh047

Stati Uniti
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
6 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?E echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
11 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?J 
juliejeanette23

Stati Uniti
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
12 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?M mssoule

Stati Uniti
Lauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
8 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?T 
thomas_stark55

Stati Uniti
Excellent work and great communication. Attention to detail.
50 USD-100 USD
Prezzo
11 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?
6 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
L leh047

Stati Uniti
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
6 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?E echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
11 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?J 
juliejeanette23

Stati Uniti
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
12 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?M mssoule

Stati Uniti
Lauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
8 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?T 
thomas_stark55

Stati Uniti
Excellent work and great communication. Attention to detail.
50 USD-100 USD
Prezzo
11 giorni
Tempo
M 
Risposta del venditore
Utile?

