Patrick J Nilan

Thank you Patrick. I will try and incorporate as many of your suggestions as I can and then maybe have you read it again. I guess I thought it was quite clear, and maybe clearer in my current draft. that Hell is awaiting them all for breaking the rules. Their choices here are also being watched, but... Mostra di più

Patrick is an excellent beta reader. The feedback was thoughtful, honest, and very useful, with clear insight into character arcs, pacing, worldbuilding, and emotional impact. The report highlighted both what was working well and where the manuscript could be strengthened, without being overly negative... Mostra di più

The level of work he puts into it. Ask question when needed while being honest on his review. Not sugar coating. Not 'I speak the honest blunt truth'. Understanding that there are differences and questions those difference to better understand. Respectful and critical to aspects of wanting your work to improve and not take over.

Working with Patrick was a huge pleasure. As a first time writer I tend to overthink my work, so I was very pleased when the feedback was how much he wanted more of the things I love to write about. His understanding of the market and marketability of work is impressive and I hope to continue to work with him in the future.

Great communication! Honest and actionable feedback. Enjoy the inline commentary provided as it’s being read giving me a feel for what someone is actually experiencing as they’re reading it.