I will give industry standard script notes from a screenwriting mfa

Get Industry-Standard Notes from a Screenwriting MFA with Production Experience

Is your script ready for the Black List or a production company? With a Screenwriting master's and scripts currently in development with production companies, I know exactly what producers want.

I provide honest, constructive, and actionable feedback designed to elevate your storytelling and polish your craft.

My notes package provides:

• A high-level look at whats working
• Page-by-page or thematic notes on structure and tone
• Insight into how a producer might view the project
• Notes on pitching and packaging
• Logline and synopsis revisions

I read features, TV pilots (half-hour and hour), and short films. I want to work with you! Stories and scripts are precious, especially to those who create them, and I want you to trust that you are working with someone who respects your work as it is and the story you're trying to tell.