I will read your screenplay and write notes to improve your story

Whether you're new to screenwriting or a veteran we all need help in various areas of storytelling. Some writers have great ideas, but lack execution. Other writers are strong storytellers but need that extra magic to stand out. I will read your feature-length screenplay. I will analyze the story for structure, characters, and dialogue with my years of screenwriting experience. I will apply the skills I learned from a story analysis course I completed. By writing the synopsis of your story I can dive deep into what works and doesn't work. I'm writing it anyway so I'll include that. The synopsis sticks with the main protagonist. If there are subplots and supporting characters they may not be present in the synopsis, but may be mentioned in the comments. My notes are constructive criticism. They're meant to bring out the potential of the story. I am on your side. Let's work together and take your story to the next level!