I will alpha or beta read your manuscript and give feedback

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5,0
5,0

Germania

Parlo Tedesco, Inglese

74 ordini completati

Developmental editor and member of the EFA and Club Ed NO AI

I started out studying Japanese and Culture at Birkbeck, University of London, but ended up working in the theatre and film industry before returning to books. In 2019, I fell in love with developmen...
Informazioni su questo servizio

I'm a developmental editor, but offer beta reading in my favourite genres: romance, (cosy) fantasy, YA and thriller. As a beta reader, my primary focus lies in how a reader reacts to the manuscript. I'll provide feedback on what I enjoyed, what I found lacking or confusing, any potential plot holes, and areas where character development, story development and dialogue could be improved.


Essentially, a beta read serves as a test run to gauge how readers may respond to your book before it hits the market.


Examples of questions I might address:


  • Did the story immediately draw me in? If not, what could be improved?
  • Were there any parts of the story that were unclear or confusing? If so, which ones?
  • What was my impression of the setting/world-building?
  • Did the characters feel realistic and relatable?
  • Were there any parts of the story where it felt like it was dragging? How could this be improved?
  • Did the flow and pace of the story feel effective?
  • Did the dialogue sound natural and authentic to the characters?
  • Was the ending satisfying for me as a reader?



In this gig, I focus on annotations, but a brief reader's report is included. I'm also willing to answer a questionnaire!

Genere:

Horror/Thriller

Narrativa

Mistero

Romanzi d'amore

Lingua:

Inglese

Tedesco

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Recensioni

17 recensioni per questo servizio
5,0

(16)
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Valutazione dettagliata
  • Livello di comunicazione del venditore
    4,9
  • Qualità della consegna
    4,9
  • Valore della consegna
    5
Ordina per
Più rilevante
  • R
    image-docs

    riefer02

    US

    Stati Uniti

    5

    I was really impressed with Sahra’s feedback. She helped identify narrative flaws that, once addressed, will guide me in crafting a more riveting story for my readers to understand and enjoy.

    200 USD-400 USD

    Prezzo

    5 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    Stati Uniti

    5

    You get every dime you pay for with Sahra. Her report and in-line comments were extremely detailed. She offered such a unique perspective on the transcript that will really help in my next round of edits. Overall, I would 100% recommend and will be returning for future reads.

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    3 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    dabdubt

    DE

    Germania

    4,3

    Sarah hat das Manuskript sorgfältig und aufmerksam gelesen und wertvolles Feedback geliefert. Sehr empfehlenswert - ich würde gerne wieder mit ihr arbeiten.

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    4 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • R

    renns333

    CR

    Costa Rica

    5

    Sahra hat mein Manuskript mit viel Liebe zum Detail und einem tiefen Verständnis beta-gelesen und hilfreiche Annotationen und einen schönen Report erstellt. Ich kann die Zusammenarbeit sehr empfehlen.

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    2 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • J

    julian_nejj

    DE

    Germania

    5

    Sahra arbeitet wirklich mit Herz und Verstand! Die Kommentare sowie der Report helfen mir extrem weiter und geben mir eine super Basis um mein Projekt professionell fortzuführen. Die Kommunikation war extrem freundlich, offen und ehrlich! Das Ergebnis ist absolut top! :)

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    4 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
Recensioni

17 recensioni per questo servizio
5,0

(16)
(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Valutazione dettagliata
  • Livello di comunicazione del venditore
    4,9
  • Qualità della consegna
    4,9
  • Valore della consegna
    5
Ordina per
Più rilevante
  • R
    image-docs

    riefer02

    US

    Stati Uniti

    5

    I was really impressed with Sahra’s feedback. She helped identify narrative flaws that, once addressed, will guide me in crafting a more riveting story for my readers to understand and enjoy.

    200 USD-400 USD

    Prezzo

    5 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • M

    mvhoang99

    US

    Stati Uniti

    5

    You get every dime you pay for with Sahra. Her report and in-line comments were extremely detailed. She offered such a unique perspective on the transcript that will really help in my next round of edits. Overall, I would 100% recommend and will be returning for future reads.

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    3 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    dabdubt

    DE

    Germania

    4,3

    Sarah hat das Manuskript sorgfältig und aufmerksam gelesen und wertvolles Feedback geliefert. Sehr empfehlenswert - ich würde gerne wieder mit ihr arbeiten.

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    4 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • R

    renns333

    CR

    Costa Rica

    5

    Sahra hat mein Manuskript mit viel Liebe zum Detail und einem tiefen Verständnis beta-gelesen und hilfreiche Annotationen und einen schönen Report erstellt. Ich kann die Zusammenarbeit sehr empfehlen.

    50 USD-100 USD

    Prezzo

    2 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No
  • J

    julian_nejj

    DE

    Germania

    5

    Sahra arbeitet wirklich mit Herz und Verstand! Die Kommentare sowie der Report helfen mir extrem weiter und geben mir eine super Basis um mein Projekt professionell fortzuführen. Die Kommunikation war extrem freundlich, offen und ehrlich! Das Ergebnis ist absolut top! :)

    100 USD-200 USD

    Prezzo

    4 settimane

    Tempo

    Utile?
    No