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TORIOLA
@toridraft
Book editor
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Inglese, Francese, Tedesco, Spagnolo
Chi sono
Hi, I’m Tori a dedicated beta reader and book editor working across all genres.
I help authors strengthen their stories through clear, constructive, and honest feedback. Whether you're polishing your final draft or shaping your manuscript before querying, I provide detailed insights on:
• Plot & structure
• Character development
• Pacing & flow
• Clarity & readability
• Dialogue authenticity
• Grammar & consistency
My goal is simple: help you turn a good manuscript into a compelling, market-ready book.
I work with new and experienced authors alike and treat every project with care.
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Beta reading
I will beta read your romance fantasy give you critique as a beta reader
Beta reading
I will beta read romance beta reader fantasy, fiction, alpha read your manuscript
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voicedbyshannon
Stati Uniti
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thank you for reminding me no what's working these chapters and also what's been causing most of the difficulty it's good to know that I got the plot down and plant details are going along other than some trimming and some fixing here and there is going to work better thank you nice for putting out that...
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williamtooke928
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Tori is friendly, engaged and has a firm grasp of story structure. He understands complexity and is an enthusiastic reader. His turn around was quick and Worth your $30. He does offer a sample so take advantage of that option!
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voicedbyshannon
Stati Uniti
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thank you for letting me know that these chapters are breathing and other than some minor modifications they are functional and alive for the story to play out for what it needs. thank you
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girlwhowrites12
Stati Uniti
I'm absolutely grateful for the feedback I recieved after Tori reached out to me. Being so used to people praising my work, and not giving full criticism, it's been hard accepting feedback. But Tori brought that spark back and I will absolutely be returning when my first draft is done!
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charliesage2018
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