Vivian Ayumi

Vivian was really easy to work with even while I had a few notable manuscript changes I made during the course of her reading my story. She really seemed to pay careful attention to characters, their motivations, and motifs/mystery threads in the story. My feedback was mostly positive which was honestly... Mostra di più

Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,... Mostra di più

I had a blast working with this Beta reader. Her feedback was well received and she gave me a clear path to how I could: 1. See it from a new perspective. 2. Fix pacing issues. 3. Where my writing could improve. She also said many lovely things that made me very happy, like with how she saw my characters,... Mostra di più

Vivian was amazing to work with!🩷She was super fast and her feedback report was detailed while still being really easy to read and understand. Her feedback was thoughtful and actionable, and I really appreciated that she understood the characters and what I was trying to accomplish with the story. She... Mostra di più

Vivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the... Mostra di più