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Leggerò in anteprima il tuo libro fantasy, romance, storico, dark, thriller o erotico
Ciao! Mi chiamo Vivian Ayumi e sono attualmente insegnante di inglese e lettrice appassionata, con una passione per immergermi nelle storie. Sono qui per offrirti feedback onesti e costruttivi per aiu...
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Ha soddisfatto criteri di prestazioni elevate e ha una comprovata esperienza nel soddisfare le aspettative dei clienti.
Cosa è piaciuto agli altri di questo freelance
environmolds
Stati Uniti
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Messico
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Paesi Bassi
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Stati Uniti
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
Informazioni su questo servizio
PER FAVORE, CONTATTAMI IN DM PRIMA DI ORDINARE! Ti Manderò un PDF con la STRUTTURA del mio rapporto!
Sono un lettore appassionato e beta reader esperto, specializzato in storie di romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, storici, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG ed erotica. So come si sentono i lettori, cosa li tiene incollati alle pagine e cosa li fa mettere giù un libro.
Il mio obiettivo è fornire un rapporto onesto sull’esperienza di lettura, individuare incongruenze e darti suggerimenti su come risolverle.
Offro feedback dettagliati, onesti e emotivamente radicati per aiutarti a migliorare:
- Trama e struttura
- Ritmo
- Leggibilità
- Sviluppo dei personaggi
- Profondità emotiva
- buchi di trama e incongruenze (+ suggerimenti)
- Feedback generale
Cosa riceverai:
- Un rapporto di feedback chiaro e organizzato (PDF)
- Sintesi di ciò che funziona e di ciò che necessita di perfezionamenti
Il mio feedback è onesto, rispettoso e costruttivo. Sono qui per aiutarti a modellare il tuo manoscritto nella sua versione migliore, che sia un romance piccante o un fantasy emotivamente profondo.
Facciamo brillare la tua storia!
Lingua:
Inglese
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Portoghese
Preferenza per lo stile di consegna
Informa il freelance di eventuali preferenze o preoccupazioni relative all'uso di strumenti di IA nel completamento e/o nella consegna dell'ordine.
FAQ
Traduzione automatica.
In quale formato devo inviare il mio manoscritto?
Preferibilmente Word o PDF, ma accetto anche altri formati.
Scrivi commenti in linea?
Sì, con un costo aggiuntivo, e l'importo dipende dal numero di parole della tua storia. Per favore, scrivimi e ti creerò un servizio personalizzato.
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E essiet08
Stati Uniti
Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
4 giorni
Tempo
Utile?T therealnishil
Stati Uniti
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
8 giorni
Tempo
Utile?D daciwrites25
Stati Uniti
Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
1 giorno
Tempo
Utile?B bcmeyer_13
Stati Uniti
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
5 giorni
Tempo
Utile?S 
shady_crafts
Cliente abituale
Bulgaria
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
4 giorni
Tempo
Utile?
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95 recensioni per questo servizio
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Valutazione dettagliata
- Livello di comunicazione del venditore
- Qualità della consegna
- Valore della consegna
Ordina per
Più rilevante
E essiet08
Stati Uniti
Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
4 giorni
Tempo
Utile?T therealnishil
Stati Uniti
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
8 giorni
Tempo
Utile?D daciwrites25
Stati Uniti
Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
1 giorno
Tempo
Utile?B bcmeyer_13
Stati Uniti
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
100 USD-200 USD
Prezzo
5 giorni
Tempo
Utile?S shady_crafts
Cliente abituale
Bulgaria
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
Fino a 50 USD
Prezzo
4 giorni
Tempo
Utile?
