Vivian Ayumi

Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit... Mostra di più

Vivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the... Mostra di più

Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts... Mostra di più

Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,... Mostra di più

Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.