Vivian Ayumi

Vivian carefully read my manuscript, and showed in her review that she understood the details of the story. She shared her reading experience honestly, and it was it will help me polish the final product. She was warm and easy to work with. She was supportive and complimentary, but also provided some... Mostra di più

Vivian did an exceptional work reviewing my manuscript. Her extensive, 11(!)-pages long reader report caught on many details that other beta readers didn't notice. She understood genre, story and invested herself emotionally with the characters. She left a lot a constructive criticism on how I can polish... Mostra di più

I had a blast working with this Beta reader. Her feedback was well received and she gave me a clear path to how I could: 1. See it from a new perspective. 2. Fix pacing issues. 3. Where my writing could improve. She also said many lovely things that made me very happy, like with how she saw my characters,... Mostra di più

Vivian is great! She is personable and her report covers the full range of everything that's important in a beta read. There is both encouragement on what works and feedback on points that need fixing or tweaking. I appreciated that she caught an inconsistency that was missed between drafts, which can... Mostra di più

I purchased several beta reading gigs in the last week and hers was one of the most detailed and thorough response. She had multiple points of consideration, but was very encouraging overall and gave me a few things to edit to make my first 50 pages more memorable!