Vivian Ayumi

Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.

Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,... Mostra di più

Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments... Mostra di più

Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.

Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly... Mostra di più